Many of us writers want our hero or main character’s to be inspirational. For them to make a lasting impression in that they will stand the test of time. So, we want them to be strong, intelligent, and attractive individuals. Basically, we want them to be everything we can imagine as the prefect hero. However, if you want the story to be realistic – then you must accept that your character needs to have flaws to be relatable.
I wrote some time back about character flaws. I wanted to expand on the topic and tie it in with your character’s personal journey as well as the roadblocks and climax of the story.
They can still have that personality trait or physical trait that sets them apart, but what if you insert a momentary hitch in their journey as in a moment of self doubt, depression, terror, misunderstanding, or jealousy as they approach the climax of the story. That hero will not be strong, intelligent, and attractive as we all wish, but they will be real.
Say your character is a great warrior who has a list of achievements longer than they are tall. It is okay to have that same character deal with moments of self doubt – it would be even more intriguing to have those moments of self doubt on the edge of battle or in battle, as if the warrior believes that any moment they are going to fail and cost their own life. The character is assumed to be brave and strong just because they are a warrior with many battles fought. However, the flaw is self doubt. Another idea for that same scenario is for the brave warrior to face someone they are terrified of.
Say you’re writing a crime novel – have your hero be terrified of a gun because a close friend or family member was killed by a gun shot wound. Have that character have to raise the gun as a matter of life or death – I’ll leave it to you on if they pull the trigger. But having that internal debate and struggle will make them relatable.
To have your character as a perfect individual all the time with a clean emotionless journey will become boring to the readers and your character may seem arrogant and cocky.
A professional example:
Harry Potter (yes, I’m referencing again): in the Deathly Hallow’s when Harry realizes he must die to kill the Horcrux living inside him. There are a few moments when he’s making his way towards the Forbidden Forest that he wants someone to see or stop him. He wants Ron, Hermione, Ginny, Weasleys, and Luna in a wish to see them one last time or them to see him. Neville and then Ginny make actual appearances as he’s leaving, and lastly, his parent’s, Sirius, and Lupin in their ghostly forms. Harry was weak in those moments, but he was strong and brave as well. He didn’t want to die, but yet, he kept moving knowing that he was going to.
L. R. Mauck